Overall great elevator pitch, you had all your data aligned and even spoke with facts and statistic which builds your credibility about such topic. You talked at a good pace and was able to communicate your message very efficiently. My only critique is you did not move your hands or body to create a more dynamic pitch.
Sarah, you were very confident and clearly knowledgeable on the topic and the horse industry in general. Adding statistical facts adds more than just an emotional side to your pitch, which is great when you give your pitch to various types of people. It might be good to practice standing up as well to see how you move your hands and keep a good stance, as this was something I personally had to work on a lot in my public speaking class. Otherwise, really a nice job.
You did a great job on your elevator pitch. You spoke with confidence and it is obvious to anyone that you knew what you were talking about. You also pitched about a very important topic that you seemed passionate about, so it made the elevator pitch even more dynamic. For future pitches, an incorporation of hand and body movement could turn a great pitch into a perfect pitch. Excellent job.
Hello Sarah, You are clearly very knowledgable about all things horses and things to do in the equestrian sector. Overall you did a very good job with your pitch and you were very captivating in explaining exactly what the need is, and how you plan to fill this need with your opportunity. I think the fact you would be the first to offer this service in the area just makes your opportunity stronger.
Overall great elevator pitch, you had all your data aligned and even spoke with facts and statistic which builds your credibility about such topic. You talked at a good pace and was able to communicate your message very efficiently. My only critique is you did not move your hands or body to create a more dynamic pitch.
ReplyDeleteSarah, you were very confident and clearly knowledgeable on the topic and the horse industry in general. Adding statistical facts adds more than just an emotional side to your pitch, which is great when you give your pitch to various types of people. It might be good to practice standing up as well to see how you move your hands and keep a good stance, as this was something I personally had to work on a lot in my public speaking class. Otherwise, really a nice job.
ReplyDeleteHi Sarah,
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job on your elevator pitch. You spoke with confidence and it is obvious to anyone that you knew what you were talking about. You also pitched about a very important topic that you seemed passionate about, so it made the elevator pitch even more dynamic. For future pitches, an incorporation of hand and body movement could turn a great pitch into a perfect pitch. Excellent job.
Hello Sarah,
ReplyDeleteYou are clearly very knowledgable about all things horses and things to do in the equestrian sector. Overall you did a very good job with your pitch and you were very captivating in explaining exactly what the need is, and how you plan to fill this need with your opportunity. I think the fact you would be the first to offer this service in the area just makes your opportunity stronger.