After receiving comments on my first pitch, I changed up the background and made it more apparent that I was standing up, used my hands more and attempted to be more engaging.
That was useful feedback. After my public speaking class, I was afraid to use distracting hand motions but in an elevator pitch, more expression is appropriate for sure.
Hi,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job on your second elevator pitch. I can really see improvement! I can also tell that you listened to the comments and made changes based on that feedback. You still sound very knowledgeable and professional as you did in your previous pitch, good work.